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One Direction things#Fanfic UNREQUITED Chapter 6 (PART TWO) We


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Chapter 6 (PART TWO)
 

We all sat crowded around the little coffee table in the middle of the room eating our dinner. Louis and I had received the food as it was delivered by a boy in the hotel uniform who made a show of his annoyance at having to carry up so much food.  “No tip for you!” Louis yelled at the boy as he left down the hall. I slammed the door quickly and burst into a fit of giggles. Zayn said he wished he’d ordered a whole other meal while the boy was up here since he seemed to enjoy his job so much. I wish he’d done too. As we ate, the boys filled me in on the plot of the soap opera (though I hadn’t really taken them as soapie-watching kinda guys…). They asked me about my friends back in Australia - I told them about my best friend Sara and another friend Maria - and Louis of course wanted to know if we really rode kangaroos to school.
“Only the kids in the outback do,” I told him. After we’d finished dinner, I started to clear the plates off the coffee table.
“Are you mad?” Louis asked incredulously. “Sweetie pie, this is a hotel
. You don’t do dishes, they’ll clear them tomorrow morning,” he insisted. I stopped half way to the kitchen with the stack of plates in my hands.
“I can’t just leave them for other people to pick up.”
“As conceited as this is going to sound, it is
 kinda their job.”
“I’m my mother’s daughter. I clean, I organise everything,” I said smiling.
“You’re not one of those creepy OCD people are you?” Louis laughed.
“No I’m not that bad. But I’m not a hobo either. I’m not going to live amongst dirty dishes!”
“Ah, go ahead then,” Louis sighed.
“Boys, boys, boys,” I sighed. “You’ll do anything to get out of cleaning won’t you? ‘This is a hotel!’” I said, mocking Louis’ laid back tone. Harry chuckled and pushed himself up from the floor. “I’ll help,” he said following me into the kitchen. He rifled through the cupboards and produced a blue checked tea towel. “You wash, I’ll dry?”
“Sure,” I replied, filling the sink.
“So, I bet you’re regretting not buying that dress yesterday,” he teased as I handed him a plate to dry. “Not in the slightest,” I replied. “Can’t have my mother thinking you boys are already having a bad influence on me!”
“You could easily hide it from her”
“You are a bad influence! And no, I’m not like that anyway.”
“I’m only kidding, Mellisa,” he chuckled. I smiled and handed him another plate.
“You must be glad to get away from school for so long,” he said stacking the crockery with a clatter.
“You have no idea,” I replied, focusing my eyes on the bowl I was scrubbing.
“You don’t like school?”
“Er, no not really. Where I go is like a prison for girls, with bricks for electric fences and a ‘get out of jail free’ card that allows us out each night to go home, eat dinner and then return again in the morning,” I said, letting the sarcasm seep into my tone. 
“really... It’s that bad?” 
“No,” I said smiling up at him, “but I cant wait to get out of there all the same. You pop stars are lucky you don’t have to worry about that kinda stuff anymore eh?”
“Maybe, but ‘we pop stars’ are faced with a whole set of other problems,” he replied, detecting the teasing note in my voice. 
“I can only imagine,” I said, shaking my head, solemnly. “Having beautiful girls follow you around all the time must be hell.” He responded to my taunt by hitting me on the arm with the dish cloth. I looked at him with my mouth wide open. “That was uncalled for.”
He smiled cheekily. “So was your comment.” 
“Know your boundaries, Harry,” I said, narrowing my eyes but trying to hold in a laugh. “You already owe me three hot chocolates.” 
“Speaking of,” he said pointing a finger at me, “Why don’t we go get those hot chocolates?” 
“Sounds like a good idea to me,” I smiled sweetly.
Free hot chocolate…in London…with five of the most genetically blessed boys I’d ever set eyes on. Good idea? That was an understatement.
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[deleted] 1 decade ago
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Phenomeniall!
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danca4evaneva 1 decade ago
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notify me again pleasee im loving this, she's such a flirt lol!!
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XxJenniferLawrenceXx 1 decade ago
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notify me again coz dis is da-boom-dig-a -ding lool its awsome :)
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ljames17 1 decade ago
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LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE notify meeee!! :)
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liveitupkeeplaughing 1 decade ago
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< 3333
keep up the amazingness beautiful :*
annd i love the last line loll i legit lol-ed
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Maggie526 1 decade ago
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I want to switch places with Melissa!!!!! Execpt if I did I would be totally crushing on Niall instead!! Put him in more!!!
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zebrastrips2 1 decade ago
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this is amazing :)
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Emibabyxo 1 decade ago
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I love it! :D notify me again, please. :)
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caitiecatforever 1 decade ago
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oh dear this story makes me laugh "only the kids in the outback do" :P hahahahhaa
you're an amazing writer, keep it up :)
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disneylover101 1 decade ago
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notify me please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! amazing-as usual!
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Dimswitch 1 decade ago
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Genetically blessed was a fantastic way to describe them! I just preordered their book!!!! :D. And great job so Far. I'd love to b the main character :)
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sophee 1 decade ago
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plz notify me when the next chapter is out thank you!!!!:)
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Lifeisworthlivingg 1 decade ago
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Can you notify me?
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Sonny84 1 decade ago
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LOVE THIS STORY :)))) ♥
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[deleted] 1 decade ago
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Haha genetically blessed xD This was great(: Notify me when the next chapter is out please? Thank you(:
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littleleftofthemiddle 1 decade ago
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Keep it up!! I keep wanting there to be more! Notify please! Shanks!
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sayyxxjayyxox33 1 decade ago
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lovelovelove<3
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IvyRoxx 1 decade ago
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ok so i loveee this sooo much notify please!!!!!!!
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skf97 1 decade ago
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Ahmazayn! ;D
I am in love with this story!
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allyrocks14295 1 decade ago
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reallly good! please write more
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