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Should I write a story? here's a bit of it... I inhaled sharply,

Should I write a story?
here's a bit of it...


I inhaled sharply, my breathing getting slower by the second. I pulled my phone out, and dialed His number. He answered on the 2nd ring. "Hey Hailie, whats up?" A tear slipped down my face. "Oh nothing..." I said, getting close to sobbing. "Hailie, what's wrong?" More tears fell, as I managed to choke out, "Brent, I- I'm...dying." He laughed nervously over the phone, as he said, "We're all dying." I gasped for air, as I said, "No... I'm literally dying." The voice on the other side of the phone got quiet. "Brent.. I just wanted to tell you something before I die-" "No, don't think like that I'm coming over-" Those were the last words before everything went black.

Watcha think?
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7 Comments

Perri917 1 decade ago
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I love it!
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maddig11 1 decade ago
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sounds really good, you should definetly write a story
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xmakesmestronger27x 1 decade ago
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that sounds soooo good! you should deff write it!
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ilovemylittlejennabean 1 decade ago
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yess! it sounds zoo good. I'm excited please keep writing.. comment and let me know please!!
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sophee 1 decade ago
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it sounds good please notify me if you do write it!!!!:)
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Onedirectionloveexx 1 decade ago
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its sound good! I would read if you posted it(;
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AmberRenee 1 decade ago
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Keep writing(:
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posted April 12, 2012 at 9:35pm UTC tagged with surveys

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