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Twenty Questions Chapter 4 (sorry if the last chapter confused


Twenty Questions

Chapter 4

(sorry if the last chapter confused you guys! hopefully this one clears it up!)

 part one
I woke with a start.
 My forehead was prickled with sweat.
And my throat was dry.
Oh. My. God.
Was I starting to remember?
I stood up and began pacing around the room so I could think.
Maybe, but…if that really happened then, what went on between then, and me ‘waking up’ in that warehouse with Carter.
Carter!
Oh my God!
Carter was the boy on the bus.
Unless it was just a dream.
But no…
It couldn’t be.
He came on the bus as if he were looking for me…
It didn’t make sense.
Why was he there at that time…
Maybe…maybe Carter was the reason the bus lost control.
“No, no, no.” I said to out loud, forcing the thought out of my mind.
It couldn’t be real.
I don’t even know if it’s a memory or a dream for crying out loud!
Besides, Carter wouldn’t do that.
He couldn’t, he’s been nothing but nice to me and-
I heard a rustling from the floor behind me.
It made me jump.
“Did you say something?” Carter asked sleepily.
“Oh…uhm, no. Sorry.”
Oops…I forgot he was in here.
I looked around the room again.
When we had arrived last night I hadn’t been able to see that well.
But now the sun was rising, and it was shining through the cracks in the three boarded up windows.
There was a small closet in one corner, I’m guessing that’s where Carter pulled our sleeping bags out of last night.
There was a light grey folding table pushed against one of the walls, right under one of the windows.
There were also four matching chairs around it.
There was an old, bulky refrigerator on the other side of the room, directly across from the table.
It was making a slight humming sound that filled the room.
Our two sleeping bags were in the center of the room.
Carter was in a dark green one he was snoring a little bit.
I realized that, aside from my ‘dream,’ this was really the first time that I actually looked at him.
His hair was the perfect length- not too long and not too short.
It was brown and shaggy, and I liked it.
His skin was sun kissed.
There was a dash of freckles sprinkled on and around his nose.
He had muscles, a lot of them.
Carter.
Wow. He was hot.
Just then, he shifted a little and rolled over.
This brought me back to reality.
Oh my God, I was being such a creep.
I laughed at myself and how stupid I was.
Then, my stomach growled.
Carter looked so peaceful sleeping, and I didn't want to wake him up so I decided to check in the fridge for something to eat.
I turned on my heel and took one step.
And then there was a knock on the door.


hey guys! sorry about that last chapter, a little confusing, i know! but hopefully this one cleared it up? if not then comment somewhere and i'll try to explain- although, i might not be too good at it!
anyways, thanks so much for reading this! i hope you like it! and if you'd like to be notified when i post a new chapter look at my second quote ever- it talks about being notified so comment if you wanna be notified! thanks again! <3
 

4 Comments

anonymous* 1 decade ago
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Great writing!! keep on going!!
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_Hey_Bro_ 1 decade ago
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wait, is this her second time of waking up or?
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Lovesdyin 1 decade ago
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lot better... i like it.
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RandomSmileyFace 1 decade ago
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it's really good :) keep writing!
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posted April 24, 2012 at 8:11pm UTC tagged with story

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