Moments
Chapter
One
Lauren's POV
I ran outside freezing my *ss off! I kept looking at the text
Liam sent me. I jumped in my car and drove to the hospital,
watching for ice. I ran into room 108 floor 2. I burst in and
Niall was on the bed laughing. "NIALL! What the f*ck
happened?!" He smiled. "I wrecked the car. No one was
injured." I could see he broke his right ring finger.
"NIALL JAMES HORAN! You need to watch yourself!!!" I
yelled loudly, and then I broke into tears. I couldn't stand
seeing him hurt. He stood up and made me look him in the eye.
"I'm fine, really Lauren, I promise." I hugged him
tightly
Harry
chuckled. "Niall she was really worried. She wearing
slippers and pajamas!" I rolled my eyes and looked at Louis
and Zayn. "Could you guys do me a favor? I'll ask you
later, when no one else is around." They nodded. "I
need to go home now, see ya guys, Niall one more move like that
and I will make sure you ALWAYS have someone with you!" As I
walked out the door Zayn grabbed my arm. "Hey could you give
me a ride home? I came here with Harry." I nodded and walked
on. It takes an hour to get to the guys appartment building. We
got a block with absolutely no words.
"Lauren?" I raised an eye brow, not taking my eyes off
the road. "Zayn?" It can't be anything important
right? "Christmas is next week(sorry if you don't
celebrate christman) what do you think Alyana would like?" I
smiled and turned the car. "Lauren where are we going?"
I kept going and we stopped at the mall. He nodded and we walked
in. "So what's your budget Zayn?" He shrugged.
"Around three or four hundred..." I got wide eyed.
"Wow...she must mean a lot to you then, I don't ever get
anything over 5 dollars from a guy." He nodded. "Yup
she is." I could tell he was thinking something but I
didn't know what.
We bought shoes, cloths, and I pitched in and we got something
really really special for her. "Zayn, help me with something
for Niall please?" We got things for a bunch of other people
and we got down to Niall. I got him the shoes he's been
wanting, cause his are all sh*tty. They cost $200.
When we got into the car we turned on the radio and turned on the
radio. WMYB came on and I turned it up really loud and we sang
along to it. we pulled up and took the bags inside. We walked in
and turned on the lights. "What took so long?!" I
screamed and Zayn laughed at me. "HARRY! If you must know
Christmas shopping, I got something for you, you, you, and you.
And you know everyone else." I smiled at Niall. "And
yours caused me to go broke!" He half smiled and I
laughed.
Erin walked in. "Harry I am cleaning today, want me to clean
your closet?" He smiled. "I was actually wondering if
you wanna go out on a date with me Erin, you're beautiful and
I really think I love you!" I smiled. "He's smooth
Erin." She smiled. "That was what he said when he asked
me out the first time." I smikled. "He's a keeper
if I had a boyfriend like that I'd NEVER let him go..."
A tear slipped and I smiled. They both smiled and me and walked
out. I sat on the couch, Zayn sat beside me, Niall on the other
side, Louis on the floor infront of me and Liam stood behind me.
Zayn was the first to talk. "What did he do to you?" I
knew he was talking about my ex. "Well, when? We first
started going out? After the last of my family died? When I
started working and couldn't see him often? When he cheated?
When he had kids with another girl? When he proposed and never
told me anything?" I was bawling at this point. I talked the
whole time about what he did to me and how he had hit me a few
times. I held onto Niall and cried. A while later I was holding
onto Zayn and was yelling now.
I fell
asleep on Zayn's couch. It was a good day gone bad, but
atleast I can wrap gifts
tomorrow!
SORRY IT WAS SO LONG, usually the first ones are short...and I'm sure it bored your brains out! :/ FEEDBACK YA'LL...IT'D BE NICE :)
"smiled". your word choice needs some word, and the fluency is choppy near the end, after she walks into the apartment and screams. after that, i didn't understand what was happening at all.
hope this helps!
-SheDreamer