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Girls Like me. Chapter 1. “Come on Bree, let’s go!"

 Girls Like me.

Chapter 1.

 “Come on Bree, let’s go!" Zoe hollered up the steps.
“Coming!” I screamed back down.
I sprinted down the steps, slamming the front door behind me.
 “Jake totally has a thing for you again, Bree.” Jaycie winked at me as we crossed the street to jakes house.
“Oh whatever.”  I rolled my eyes sarcastically.
“She’s right Bree,  that was not just a friendly hug.  That was an ‘I want to get in your pants’ kind of hug.” Zoe added.
“Zoe!” I giggled, playfully punching her arm.
“Well, it was!” She said defensively.
 “Knock Knock.”  Zoe said, walking into Jake’s house without actually knocking.
“I think I finally understand why parent’s like you so much.” I teased her as we made our way downstairs.
“No one answered the door, so we just came in.” Zoe told Jake, as she made herself comfortable in the corner of the sofa.
“Yeah, or you just didn’t knock.” I mumbled under my breath, shooting her an accusing look.
“Yeah, that too.” She said, shoving a few chips in her mouth.
“So, what do you guys want to do?” Noah asked.  “I mean, it has to be something crazy, this is Bree’s first time home in 2 years.”
“How about we go egg that house down the street.  You know, the red one?” Ryan suggested.
“I said crazy, not illegal.” Noah said, wrapping his arms around Jaycie.
 “How about we play spin the bottle?” Zoe offered.
 “Fine.” Noah agreed.  “But we have to do something better later.”
“I’ll go get the bottle.” I said, standing up.
“Are you sure you remember where it’s at?  I could help you.” Jake offered.
“I think I’ll be fine.” I smiled slightly, walking up the stairs to the kitchen.
I searched through the kitchen cabinets for an empty wine bottle.
Usually, Jake kept it above the fridge, but he must’ve moved it, because it wasn’t there anymore.
As I turned to look underneath the microwave, I felt myself press against Jakes warm chest.
It was only after that, that I realized we were falling to the floor.
“Oh my gosh, I’m so sorry!” I blurted.
“Bree, it’s fine.” He smiled, helping us both up from the floor.
I felt his breath brush against my cheek as I stood up.
We were standing a lot closer than I had thought.
His piercing brown eyes stared into mine, and I realized my hands were still gripping his arms from the fall.
As he leaned into kiss me, I pulled away, knowing that I couldn’t give him what he wanted.
Not yet, anyways.
“We should probably get back downstairs.” I muttered, pushing a few strands of hair out of my face.
“Y-yeah.” He stuttered, snapping back into reality and grabbing an empty bottle off of a shelf.
Pulling in Jake was going to be a lot easier than I had planned.
Sure, maybe he was a different person than he was two years ago.
It didn’t matter though, I was going to teach him a lesson.
I was going to teach him that when you play with fire, you get burned.
Not only that, but I was going to teach the player,

 How to play the game.


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114 Comments

juliaissmexy 1 decade ago
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great story my friend told me bout this i love it your a great writer if any bi.t.c.h tells you otherwise f them!!!!! you rock thx soo much :]
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dragonfly26 1 decade ago
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Whoa. I just started reading this, and I already love it. I wish I could write as good as this.... :(
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kittykatzz1234 1 decade ago
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notifyyy me i am on your proluge but a reminder!
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Orla 1 decade ago
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I loveee it!
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FelicisFeather 1 decade ago
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WOW you are great! Keep on writing!
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liveitupkeeplaughing 1 decade ago
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Annamaria25 1 decade ago
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MaddieCracker189 1 decade ago
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good job keep it up!
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storydiva4eva 1 decade ago
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notify me !!!! this is gr8 :)
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FoxfireFlamedancer 1 decade ago
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hey!!! i really LOVE ur story so far... i am writing a story and i posted the 1st chapter on here.....do u think u could read it to see if its good???
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LetmeBex 1 decade ago
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I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THE END.
"Not only that, but I was going to teach the player, how to play the game." ‹3
LOVE . Keep notifying me.
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youarebeutifulxoxo 1 decade ago
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this is an amazing story so far and you ar ean amazing writer (: ITS AMAZING!!!
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ImaBelieber_ 1 decade ago
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Oh. My. Gosh. YOU'RE SUCH AN AMAZING WRITER. I love this story already!!! (:
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TheAwesome 1 decade ago
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I LOVEEE ITTTTTTT but it won't let me fave so you have one more comment and one more fave :)
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WhatAJoke08 1 decade ago
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OWNEEEEEDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD OWNAGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
haha she is gonna kick his buttttttt!!!!!!!!! you go bree!!!!!!! own him and the kick him to thwe curb but i have a feeling that she will fall for him
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cantbelieveit 1 decade ago
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I love this!!!
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Ndubz3 1 decade ago
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amazing! :)
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ilovestars 1 decade ago
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omg i hope this book i even beter than ur last one!! u a freaking amazing writer..:)
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SparksFlyxXx 1 decade ago
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Love this. Remember me when you're a famous author, lol!(:
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lillan122 1 decade ago
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awesome
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posted June 2, 2012 at 1:23pm UTC tagged with story

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