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Girls Like me . Chapter 13. ““You like nice sweetie.”

Girls Like me .

Chapter 13.

“You like nice sweetie.” My mom complimented my strapless black dress.
“Thanks.” I said, adjusting my crutches.  “I have a date tonight.”
“Excuse me, I thought we agreed on dinner tonight?” My mom crossed her arms, waiting for an explanation.
“Sh//t.” I mumbled under my breath.  “Mom, I’m sorry, I totally forgot.  But this is really important.  Like, you have no idea.”
“Something is always more important than your family, isn’t it?” She asked, tears brewing in her eyes.
“Mom, come on.  It’s just one night, don’t get all emotional.” I rolled my eyes.
“Fine, have a nice time with your friends.” She answered sternly, proceeding to her bedroom.
“Whatever.” I scoffed, limping out to the driveway where Collin was waiting for me in his mustang.  I couldn’t wait until I was 16, and could drive wherever I wanted.
“You look nice.” He smiled as I made myself comfortable in the front seat.
“Yeah.”  I laughed sarcastically.  “The crutches really complete the outfit right?”
Collin laughed.  “So, who are we double dating with?”
“Well, uhm.” I laughed unsurely.  “Zoe and-“
“Zoe?!” He shot me an almost angry expression.
I gave him an innocent smile, hoping he wouldn’t be mad.  After all, Zoe is his ex-girlfriend.
“Oh come on.” I lightly punched his shoulder.  “It won’t be that bad.”
“I guess you’re right.” He shrugged his shoulders.
“Oh yeah, one more thing.” I said hesitantly, knowing that the whole Zoe thing was already a lot to take in.
“What?” He asked nervously.
“You have to make my ex-boyfriend jealous.” I said slowly, trying not to make eye contact.  “That’s who Zoe’s date is.”
“Really?” he asked surprised.  “Okay.”
“Seriously?  You spaz over a double date with Zoe, but you’re okay with me just telling you that you have to act like my boyfriend?”
“Yeah.” He winked at me.
I smiled, rolling my eyes at his immaturity.
“So, do I have to like, kiss you and stuff?” He asked hopefully.
“If you’re okay with that.” I giggled.
“I think I’ll manage.” He said happily, as we pulled up to the beach.
“Okay.” I sighed.  “You ready?”
He nodded, helping me out of the car.  Collin slipped his arm around me as we walked towards Zoe and Jake, who were standing next to a game on the pier.  I had to admit, the look on Zoe’s face was priceless when she saw me with Collin.
That’s right sweetheart, I thought to myself.

Paybacks's a b//tch.
         
  For all of you who left comments in the last chapter, thank you ♥ You are all amazing, and really made me feel better.  You guys are right, I shouldn't let that kind of stuff get to me.  &for those of you who were wondering, I wasn't considering the hate as people who pointed out my mistakes.  Some girl wrote me this big long paragraph on how my story sucked and that I was stupid.  I'm working on chapter 14 right now, should be up soon ♥

45 Comments

WhatAJoke08 1 decade ago
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LOVEDDDDDDDDDDDDD it payback is a b!tchh ohh sweet sweet revenge
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Infinity on high* 1 decade ago
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i. LOVE. this. chapter.
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bridgettbabe000 1 decade ago
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i never read, but this is the best non book thing ever, i come on here to read them all the time, if you ever become an author you'll be a hit, keep up the good work!!<3
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izzybeLLa_127 1 decade ago
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OHHH things are heating up!! love it, keep it up :)
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ashleeosborne97 1 decade ago
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your a great writer, i love your story so far :) do you reckon you could maybe find a picture of all your characters, even if you dont have any? I just really want to know what they would ook like in your head :)
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.* 1 decade ago
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I love this story, you are truely an amazing writer :) I am definately gonna by your books if you are going to be an author :D xx
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Apage 1 decade ago
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don't listen to the haters. i love the story ♥
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cropacuddles22 1 decade ago
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That's right sweetheart payback's a b!itch haha I love that!!
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its_okay_not_to_be_okay 1 decade ago
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haha lmfao i love revenge;)
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cupcake_lover88 1 decade ago
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OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!(:
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itscomplicated9898 1 decade ago
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lol love the end!!!!! never stop writing...ever(:
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AlyssaBreanne* 1 decade ago
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Omgggggg paybacks a that was amazingly awesome story too
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lolz62 1 decade ago
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The end of this really made me smile lol I love it!
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elysey 1 decade ago
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You told me to write for ME, not for anyone else. If those anyone else's are hating on you, just ignore it if you love it. Writing is all about you, nobody else matters. I really like your story and so do many other people. And they are probably just hating because you are popular and other people only have like 2 faves on stories, but you no what, it doesn't matter. WRITE FOR YOU, NO US ♥ stay beautiful! :)
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Jerseygirl1 1 decade ago
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Good for you, let the haters hate just don't let them get to you. I love your stories your an amazing author and keep writing gurl cause as long as your writing I'll be on witty
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x0lovethelifeyoulive0x 1 decade ago
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Anyone who is hating on your stories really needs to stop, this story is relatable and entertaining. You're a great writer and don't let anyone tell you differently. If they don't appreciate what you can do it's their loss. I deeply apologize that anyone would push you to the point that you wish to stop writing, you truly could do great things if you continue to pursue your talent. Haters gonna hate, but don't let the few keep you from doing what you love and what us, your fans, love.
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maaddiissoonn 1 decade ago
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words cannot describe how much i love this. you’re so good at writing, i’d read this over & over & over again over a published book any day! i hardly ever get on witty, but the only reason i do is to check & see if the next chapter is up. even when i quit witty, i still had a bookmark on my computer that took me to your profile so i could read the story. i love it. & i love your writing. you’re talented! :)
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Thewittygirl 1 decade ago
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OHH MYY GOODDDDD.
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Thebestpersonever 1 decade ago
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obviously your stories are amazing or you wouldnt have as many faves and followers as you do, you just need to forget about the haters and write for yourself and the people who like and connect with your stories, i think they are rlly good and would be devasted if you stopped :) so keep it up your great
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edance123 1 decade ago
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love, Love, LOVE!! This story just keeps getting better(:
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