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The First Day Chapter 4 I was curious to what was going to happen

The First Day



Chapter 4

I was curious to what was going to happen next  would Annabelle and I be okay?  I really hope the armed  gunman didn't see us I was thinking.  The shop owner said "When I was younger this happened once before I was young but I could hear gunshots being fired. The robber actually managed to get in and steal all the money in the till.  That's why all the windows up front are bulletproof because I didn't want that happening to future employees, because trust me it would've been incredibly nerve racking for you two if they were able to get in."  I sighed and then the owner asked "Perhaps did you  manage to see what the guy looked like?"  
      Suddenly the police came up to the door and the owner went to let them in. One of the policemen said "Ladies what did you see?"  Annabelle looked at me and I said "She saw nothing, I on the other hand saw, him when he was turning to face the store front and I caught a glimpse of him, he probably caught a glimpse of me as well."  The policemen I could tell were frustrated the one who was talking to us said "What is the description of the suspect?"  I was incredibly nervous I had actually told Annabelle what he looked like and had her explain it.  She said "He had brown hair, brown eyes, he was white,he was wearing a black jacket, neon blue shirt, black jeans, and neon blue shoes."  I thought to myself hmm... there must've been a reason he was wearing that. Normally robbers wear all black, and he was trying to rob the store in the middle of the day.  Most would try at night.  
     As the police asked us questions I just couldn't think of what was to come next.  Would Annabelle and I be okay?  Would Annabelle and I have to move because the robber actually saw me and knows now that I work here?  He must've had a motive other then to rob the till, his motive was probably to hold Annabelle and I captive.  

Feedback?  Follow/ fave! I couldn't think of where to cut it off sorry it's taken so long for chapter 4 I've been extremely busy with working. Comment what you think! Comment if you want to be notified(;

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kimmyieo1 1 decade ago
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Thanks :D
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ashleylove123 1 decade ago
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its pretty good :)
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posted July 3, 2012 at 2:10pm UTC tagged with story

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