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Tell No Secrets. Chapter two. As i walked closer to the man in

Tell No Secrets.
Chapter two.

As i walked closer to the man in the jeep i got more creeped out so i decided to turn back and head for a shop or somewhere else where the man would stop giving me those discusting looks. We walked for miles and every step i took i felt heavier and heavier and with Casper in my arms i felt like i was going to faint but i carried on walking until we got to a nearby corner shop, rather small but it would do. I had around £6.96 which i have been saving up in the 13 years of my life because my mother would never give me money,Just for her alcohol of course but i kept every penny change every time i was sent to get her whiskey. The woman was kind enough to give us a free chocolate bar each as she saw the state i was in but i did not tell her anything that had happened. I thanked her then bought 2 small bottles of water and 2 packets of Salt And Vinegar crips so we could eat them later which cost £1.90 so that left me with £5.06 left for the upcoming weeks. Me and Casper ate our chocolate bars when we got out of the shop and then sat on a wall. I saw alot of Jeeps passing but there was one that was slower than others but why would that be a problem anyway, all cars can go at different speeds, right? i think about an hour flew by until the same Jeep that was going slow came back and went to the corner shop. I thought that this was a tad freaky even though some people go out more than once in a day. I grabbed Caspers hand and sprinted to the carpark where we were earlier and noticed that the jeep with the man staring at me had gone. Then i dashed back to the shop while Caspers asking'Where are we going Saffron, Why are you in such a hurry?' i replied' More walking less talking.' I now saw that the jeep at the corner shop was right behind me and the same man that was in the car park staring was in it.
'Get in the car' he said.
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