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Girls Like me . Chapter 19. “He was just a friend, Jake.”

Girls Like me .

Chapter 19.

“He was just a friend, Jake.”  I whispered, pulling my lips away from his.
He had a weird look in his eyes, like he didn’t know what had just happened.  Honestly, I didn’t really know what I had just done either.
But I knew one thing for sure, that kiss meant nothing to me, and everything to him.
And it wouldn’t be long until he figured out how much it didn’t mean to me.
“But you hugged him, and-“
“There’s nothing wrong with hugging a friend, Jake.” I stated, feeling his breath push against my cheek.
“You’re right Bree.” He admitted, dragging his fingers through his hair.  “I was stupid to get mad, and I’m sorry.”
“It’s alright.” I said quietly, giving him a slight smile.  “So, are you down to hang out tomorrow?”
A wide smile appeared on his face, revealing his impossibly white teeth.
“I’d love to.” He said, pecking my forehead.  “Are there going to be any unexpected ex-boyfriend’s I need to be prepared for?”
“No.” I giggled, rolling my eyes and stepping out of the car.  “So, meet me tomorrow at the beach around one, alright?”
“Alright.” He smiled, starting the car and slowly backing out of the driveway.
I waved, watching him drive away.  Then, I quickly ran inside, unable to wipe the devious smile away from my face.  I pulled my phone out from my jean shorts, creating a group message.
I skimmed through my contact list, adding number after number, making sure I didn’t leave any of his previous victims out.
It took a lot of work, and persuasion, but I finally got everyone I needed to agree to come.
I then texted Jaycie and Zoe, telling them to meet me at the beach around 12:30.  I made sure that they were going to bring the needed supplies, too.
It was 10:30pm by the time I had finished making arrangements for tomorrow.
Most girls looking to seek revenge on their ex-boyfriend would just simply reject him when he admits to wanting her back.  But no, not me.  This had to be worth it, and original.
This had to be revenge that was truly unforgettable.
Sure, I promised that I wouldn’t surprise him with any unplanned visits from my ex-boyfriends.

 I never said anything about his ex-girlfriends.
               
        Next chapter's the end guys♥ I know a lot of you want a sequel, but I really just don't feel like continuing this story.. There will be an epilouge though..♥  I love you all xoxo  Still unsure of if there will be a next story.  I'm just getting tired of being told that i'm ugly, stupid, not talented, and oh here's a new one, that I should die of cancer.

153 Comments

Glow 1 decade ago
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Those people are jealous of you! Don't you dare listen to one word they say, you're amazing!! This is your talent, so you express it, because that's YOUR talent!
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flossydossy 1 decade ago
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Wwwwwhat? Who said that cus I will HUNT THEM DOWN!
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itbemelx25 1 decade ago
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I know you probaly wont read this but honestly those people are jealous of yojr writing and they are going to judge you because they cant write as good as you. In your life theres going to be people who knock you down and and say you cant and you have to stand back and say watch me. Your not ugly ive seen your profile picture your honestly really pretty! Ive been a fan from the beggining and ide hate to see talent like ur go down the toilet. Your not stupid, oviously if u can write amazing stories your not stupid. Im not even gonna say anything about people say your not talented cause that bullsh///t. And die of cancer?? If someones sick enough to say that they should die of canncer. If u ever need to talk im here comment on my profile.
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realme2 1 decade ago
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People are going to say mean things to you. & you putting that on your quote, makes them feel good about getting to you. Let hatters hate. Honestly, the reason why they do it, it's because there stories don't get as much feedback as yours, and it makes them jealous. & mad and thats why they say those things. If you don't want to continue writing. Then don't. But don't do it because of the holes. Do it because you really just want to quit.
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pandoralova 1 decade ago
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oh my gosh how dare anyone say anything so mean! you're such an amazing writer, and i think if anyone else says any of those things to you again, all off the girls commenting not to stop will surely hunt them down (including me;) ) but i get it if you just feel it's time to end it if you don't have more things to write in this, but it was fantastic while it lasted! you're a really amazing writer
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hardcorelove22 1 decade ago
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nooooo! pleasee dnt stopp the first thingg i do when i get on witty is read your story i lovee it you are so talented...dont let the haters win :)
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josiewdog123 1 decade ago
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This is not a hate. I repeat not hate. There is a website called FictionPress, where you can post your work up so more people can see it. Not just here, and more people will enjoy it. I think you should sign up
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xxHelloLovelyxx 1 decade ago
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honestly, you cannot stop writing. don't let an amazing natural talent like yours go to waste because some b.tches can't keep their mouths shut. you're real, and people like you are hard to find :)
and you write for you. you're not writing to please anybody else. so don't stop because some stupid 12 year olds don't like the story. and take a look at all the people supporting you vv
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Nyprincess33 1 decade ago
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OMG! I Just started reading Girls Like Me To\day and I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHH! I love the story!
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AnnaBranum 1 decade ago
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Hurry I need more! :D
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dontcryblueskys 1 decade ago
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/.//////////are yu serious?! you have over 500 people who absolutely ADORE your stories, and you HAVE to continue this one, its the best so far!!! PLEASE DONT STOP MAKING THEM <3 \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\
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purpleevening 1 decade ago
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No talent? I don't even have any readers reading MY story...
You've got great writing talent!
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cupcakesweetie 1 decade ago
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girlll!!! don't listen to those people. They just jealous 'cause they can't write like you can!!! :)
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[deleted] 1 decade ago
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Woahh omggg I need more of this story!
& don't listen to the haters, they're just jealous of your amazing talent! Just think about all the fans you have, you can't let the haters win. That's what they want but you have to rise above them (:
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ncisrox13 1 decade ago
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Who the hell told you to die of cancer??? I love your stories btw!! xxxx
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sunkid4 1 decade ago
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You are awesome..and your stories too..please just keep writing ) so you're helping and giving a hope for a lot of girls))
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livelifeforever22 1 decade ago
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you are very talented a great writer! u definitely need to keep writing! a lot of people love u and your stories don't give up becuz of a few haters they are just jeluss 500 + ppl like your chapters each time!! keep writing or a sequel!!
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gdaga122 1 decade ago
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you have to keep writing! who cares what the haters say if you have hundreds of people who love your stories!
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Randomzaremything 1 decade ago
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Dont listen to anyone who says that You have and AMAZING talent. Look at the half full side of the glass. You have sooooooooooooooooooo many fans DONT STOP PLEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Plus I don't read anyone elses stories coz like yours are the only good ones on witty.
No offence anyone who writes stories on witty!
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mrsbieber16 1 decade ago
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pleasepleaseplease keep writing, you're amazing. don't let people bring you down. you have talent, they're just jealous. please keep writing.! (:
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