MY
HEART WILL GO ON♥
Titanic
Fanfiction
CHAPTER
THREE
Starring herown as Belva
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Chapter Three: Belva's Point of View
I sat down on a stump and sighed. I sat for a good hour watching
the ships pull in and out before I heard someone yell "Has
anyone seen Belva Dawson?!" I quickly turned around and saw
Fabrizio running towards me. I waved my arm and stood up
"Over here!" Fabrizio came running over and hugged me
and said something in Italian. I reminded him I didn't speak
Italian and he apologized and said "Ready to go?" I
picked up my suitcase, nodded and followed him. We had to walk
awhile to get to his house. We walked along the cobblestone for
15 minutes, I counted and then the dirt path for 10. When we got
to his house he showed me where I would stay and he said that he
had a neighbor around my age. I thanked him and sat down on the
bed. He had left to go make dinner. I looked out the window...he
had a nice view of the city, much better then what we had. After
all, half the time Jack and I hadn't even a roof over our
heads. I started unpacking and then stopped myself when I got to
a picture of me and my parents. I was real little, probably about
three. I missed them dearly but I was going to see them soon. I
sat there on the bed for a while thinking when I heard laughter
outside. It was the neighbor Fabrizio had told me about. I
figured I wouldn't be here long but just incase I should make
acquaintances. I was on my way out the door when Fabrizio stopped
me to tell me dinner was ready. We sat down and ate a quick and
uncomfortable meal. He asked me about what America was like and
if I remembered anything, it made me sad to keep thinking about
my family but of course he didn't know that. He started
talking about his family and to be honest I zoned out, I just
nodded and smiled. I finished my meal in record time and asked to
be excused. Then I swiftly made my way to the door and went to
try to make a new friend.
FEEDBACK?! ANYONE WANT TO BE THE NEIGHBOR?!
Just a suggestion for when you're typing would you be able to space out your story more? Like speeches and such on a different line, idk i just find it hard to read all togahter like that. ~ Just a suggestion.
But the story is really good so far. c;