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Tragedy Chapter 1 Jane wasn't sure if she should go to the

Tragedy
Chapter 1



Jane wasn't sure if she should go to the police or not. She was scared and didn't know what to do. Where are they? She wondered. What's going to happen? If anything happens to them I couldn't live with myself. What would dad do? I decided to call my best friend. *ring, ring, ring* "Hey Ames I don't know what to do! I don't know where Kara and Toby are! Some guy has Kara's phone an- "
"Woah Jane! Slow down, slow down! I can't understand you, explain slower!"
"Kara and Toby are missing, come to my house right now!" And she hung up. She paced the floor while she waited for Amy to come. 
*Knock, knock* Jane ran to the door and hugged Amy. She managed to say"They're gone."

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Toby was taken from the dark basement and Kara was left there bounded on the floor, blood dripping from her right foot. Her boot was missing, it must've fallen off while the kidnappers dragged her and Toby. The two guys from upstairs had taken Toby. "Where was he going?"  He better be okay, if he gets hurt what will I-" She stopped because she heard a huge crash not to far a way from her followed by a whimper. "TOBY!"
"I-I'm alright" he whined. He was thrown into some boxes and glass.
"What did they do to you up there?"
"If I tell you they'll kill us." They saw the door open.
 "Dave, go get the girl!" he chuckled.
"Don't scream and do not give in." Toby whispered.
"Let's go." the man said. He dragged her upstairs. Toby heard talking, footsteps, and coughing.
What are they doing to her? How much longer will they be up there? Toby wondered.

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Jane and Amy had been talking for hours. Jane finally decided that she should call Kara's phone, that it was worth it if she lost a finger. She had to find out where they were. *ring,ring,ring* "I told you not to call again."
"Ahh! Let go! No!" Kara screamed in the background.
"Where are they?" Jane said firmly.
"Oh, you'll see." And the phone line went dead.

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Toby saw the door opened and a man came down with two unconscious bodies. He couldn't see if the were boys or girls, but he was soon to find out. Then he heard a huge crash. "Kara, is that you?" Toby asked.
"Y-yeah." she cried.    
"It's okay. There are more people here though."
"I know, I think it may be Jane." she whimpered.




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3 Comments

Patrick_Stop* 1 decade ago
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Really cool :)
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imkindofabigdeal 1 decade ago
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notify me!(:
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xlivelaughl0vex 1 decade ago
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notify? :D loved it.
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