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End of Innocence. (Rachel's POV) Chapter 3 Part 2. I ran

End  of   Innocence.
(Rachel's POV)
Chapter 3
Part 2.
 
I ran down the stairs and people were there, so i called out for help and all they did was point and laugh. I ran out the door.
I didn't stop until i reached a near by elementary school that had just gotten out of session. The only times i would stop is to check if anyone was following me. No one ever was.
I look back really quick while i was still running and i immediately run into someone, so i fall to the ground.
He had dark hair and chocolate brown eyes with perfect tan skin.
He reaches his arm out offering to help me up, but instead i back up. 
"Come on, i won't hurt you," he breathed gently grabbing my wrist. I tense at his touch.
He stares at me for what feels like ever and then whispers something.
"Hey, you're that kid that went missing, right?"  I nod.
"Come on, i'll drive you to the police station" he said pulling me to his car. 
I tried to run and hide but he kept holding on to my wrist.
"I won't hurt you, remember?" he said with a slight smile.
I was still a skeptic, but hey! Nothing worse can happen to me.
He put me in the car and buckled in my seat belt. He got in the car and i heard a slight clicking noise. "Child lock," He smiled. "Because i don't want you to try to run away from me."
I gave him a dirty look which made him laugh and then he whispered something.
"By the way, my name is Mr. Young," he coughed "I mean Carter." He smiled. "Sorry i'm a teacher, you know?" 
I nodded and gave him a slight smile.
As he pulled into the police station, a swarm of people gathered around his car. He got out and opened my door for me. Everyone started taking pictures.
Suddenly, i wanted to run. As fast as i can and never turn back. Everyone was untrustworthy to me now. And then i saw my parents.


I think i'm going to upload another chapter tonight, but don't get your hopes up! 
comment if you're confused about anything. I'll try to clear it up. Also, i'll be uploading the pictures for the main characters tonight. Should i put a picture of "The Man" or would you guys rather go off with what you picture?
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Teaser: And then i saw the girl. The same girl on the bed. With him.
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liisaniicole19 1 decade ago
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heey do you notify? if not, its totally cool, i can just come check your profile
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posted September 3, 2012 at 1:06am UTC tagged with story

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