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Want To Be Loved By You A One Direction fanfic Chapter 1 Liam's

Want To Be Loved By You
A One Direction fanfic
Chapter 1
Liam's P.O.V

"Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you hapy birthday to LEYUMMMMMMMMM, happy birthday to you!" I blow out the candles to my bat man cake, and get a kiss from Danielle. I'm very suprised she even came to this thing since we've been having so many problems, but she did arrange it so I don't see how she couldn't. As I look at the crowd infront of me, everything is happening in slow motion. Niall pushing Lou out of the way to get to the cake, Zayn going up to random people and yelling "VAS HAPPENIN?!", Harry flirting with a pretty girl in the back of the room, and then theres Danielle braging to her friends about how hard it was for her to plan this. I just roll my eyes, and let them keep wandering. They end up falling on a girl waiting on tables in the back. She was about 5'4, with hair pulled back in a messy bun, and the bluest eyes i've ever seen. She was radient and I couldn't take my eyes off her. I start walking over to find out her name, but I feel a tap on my shoulder. I turn around and am greeted by someone who works here asking me if I want any cake. As soon as she realises it was me, Liam, she then puts on a huge fake smile while twirling her hair and batting her eyelashes. She starts to flirt with my, but I just dismiss her and head off towards my mystery girl. 

Authors note: Hey guys, I know a lot of you are not reading this put the people who are feedbak please?<3 This was a boring chapter, I know, but I promise it gets better.
Feedbak<333 

5 Comments

little_random_fact 9 years ago
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This is good.
Are you goin to continue with this fan fic??
-Little Random Fact
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Ellmo 9 years ago
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I LOVE IT. Notify me?
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sierra17 9 years ago
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It's really good but oooonnneeeee thing...could you maybe use a different font..I hate this one I can't read it.??
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xoxbsxox98 9 years ago
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<3333 i love it! mystery girl:) ~ALYSSA
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niallsexyhoran 9 years ago
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It's great. I love it!(:
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posted September 5, 2012 at 7:27pm UTC tagged with story

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