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Inherited Chapter 9 I swam to the surface for more air. Then


Inherited
Chapter 9

 
 
     I swam to the surface for more air. Then I dove back under to save Josh.
     As I got level with him, I saw that his leg was caught between two rocks.
     I tried pulling it out but I couldn’t for a while. I finally got his leg out but his jeans were caught on the rock.
     It was no use trying to pull the rock off, it is too heavy. I would have to rip his jeans. I took a sharp piece of coral and cut the jeans till they ripped.
     I grabbed Josh and swam as fast as I could to the surface.
     I swam against the current to the rock and laid him down. He was unconscious.
     I lifted his head but put it back down almost imediently. Something sticky hand my hands.
     I looked at my hands and noticed the stick stuff was red.
     Ohno, I thought. I flipped him over to see a big gash about two fingers wide and from the mid-part of his head about 4 inches long. It was gushing red blood.
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New fromat!!!!! Hope you like!!!!!! Fave and comment to be notifyed. Shout out to beautifuldisatstergirl (One of my best friends from school who, btw, intruduced me to this site) is writing a story. Please check it out!!!!! Plus, if you could, get some pleople to read my story!!!! It would mean so much to me!!!! I loooove you all!!!!!!!!
ps- really short chapter. Sorry.......Hopfully the next ones will be bigger.
pps- I am starting to write my next story but I need you to let me if you like the plot:
Its called eighteen. Its about a girl whos life is supposed to be really good but goes really bad. It will be really intested.
What do you think???????? Oh, just bcause I'm writing this story does not mean Inherited is almost over.....I fact its not really that close. Just writing it in advance.
Haha....the note is almost longer than the story!!!!!


 
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3 Comments

luv2flip910 1 decade ago
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH AMAZING STORY!!! please notify it!
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craziirose 1 decade ago
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Your chapters are super short, and if they are short they at least should have some suspenseful line at the end. which this did btw!
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Cutie2946 1 decade ago
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u spelled disaster wrong erin
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posted September 14, 2012 at 8:59pm UTC tagged with story

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