Story Quote #6691363
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Imagine this... One day you and your husband, or you and your

Imagine this...
One day you and your husband, or you and your wife go to the doctors, you find out that you are pregnant! you celebrate you plan your future you dream of all things happy, you wonder what it will be, a boy or a girl??? You find you'd be happy with both, nine months pass, the female is on the table, she's giving birth, out comes the baby. It cries you hear its glorious voice, you get shot into the future you imagine them going to school, first date, all of the firsts, you hold it close and smile. 5 years later your little baby starts school, mommy and daddy feel lonely so they plan another baby, by the age of 6 you have a new child, another bit of perfection! By the age of ten the first child feels ignored, the second feels adored, the eldest shrugs the feeling off, says to themselves it will get better as time goes on. You are pregnant again, you say this is your last child, you make it the best. The eldest was a boy, strong, smart, loving and a sweet brother, the second was a daughter, you swore to her you'd never let her littel heart be broken, the last was a son, another one, a trouble maker. By age two his main goal is to steal the spotlight, by age five all he wants is mommy and daddy's eyes on him. The eldest feels ignored, but he's fifteen he pushes through, the daughter cries for you, all she wants is your attention, but your eyes are on the youngest, you want to treasure his childhood. 3 years flash by, your oldest is graduating, poof into college, he kisses his sister's head and tells her he'll always be there for her, then he leaves. You still are treasuring the youngest, you want him to stay a baby, so you ignore your daughter. She cries out for help, shes 15 now, she sobs, she starves herself to be perfect for another man some day, and she slices her skin. You've lost all interest in her, she only wants to be alone anyway, you let her. She rememebers her brother, who is now in college, who never comes home, she wants him to be there, she wants him to care, she needs him. Finally at age 16 she can't take it anymore, everyone is prettier, everyone is more loved, she takes a bottle of pills, puts her head in the noose, and steps off of the chair. Suddenly you have a flash back, to that beautiful baby girl in your arms, you cry out, begging her to come back, but it's too late, don't you see? You killed your own child, you didn't see it, you can only blame yourself. The day of the funeral her brother comes back into town, he cries on the grave of his dead little sister, he begs her to forgive him, he begs her to come back. But she can't, she's dead. Your eldest turns to alcohol, drinking away the memories, in 5 years he's a full blown alcoholic, and he takes his life and kills himself, he needs her in his life. Your youngest is alone now, you try to stay strong, you try todo everything for him but you just can't. Both of his parents fall into depression and he's left alone. He struggles through but all of a sudden he's faced with bullying, they say he's the reason that his sister killed herself, was it true? He clings to drugs, they take him away into a place of peace, at age 18 he's almost going to graduate, he panics, he over doses and you are alone. All of you children are dead, what do you  do now? Life is over, you live but its a constant struggle, it never gets better, it never gets easier. You wish you could go back, you would do anything just to see them again, but you can't. You die inside.
Yes you matter, don't give up. And always pay attention to others actions. Save a life.


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67 Comments

∦☔∦* 4 years ago
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That was beautiful
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Alejandraaa_Oh 6 years ago
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That was beautiful . This described my life how older brother acts in the way he shrugs it off , how Im the middle child and how I feel almost everyday, and well my sister is the attention hog. It was amazing to see how things turned out for that family. I would never commit suicide , but to see how the seconds child choice effected everyone was just amazing. You have a beautiful gift , and don't ever loose it.
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animegirl101 6 years ago
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:'( sad but very good
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has_no_life 6 years ago
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deep dude.....
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Plusle_N_Minun 6 years ago
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You deserve an award! That was amazing
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LaurenStyles21 6 years ago
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well that was very emotional...but it was also very good. you should really be a writer. :)
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lol_lizzy 6 years ago
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That was...... AMAZING. I'm literally crying so hard. i don't think anybody should go through that.
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MariaOchoa2014 6 years ago
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Wow! This is just amazing and inspirational.
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XxXxPerfectlyImperfectXxXx 6 years ago
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Holy s.hit
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 6 years ago
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:ooo thank you
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XxXxPerfectlyImperfectXxXx 6 years ago
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You're welcome. Wow, that's crazy though. How do you even come up with this stuff?
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 6 years ago
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Mainly its just my mind in text like. My siblings have committed suicide, i know the feeling like. And then i've seen their foster parents fall to their knees crying because it HAS to be their fault in their minds. Plus i know the loss of a child, not by suicide no, but i know that pain
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XxXxPerfectlyImperfectXxXx 6 years ago
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That's horrible. No one should ever have to go through stuff like that.
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 6 years ago
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id rather it be me then like anyone else
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XxXxPerfectlyImperfectXxXx 6 years ago
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You'd rather it be you than anyone else. Wow, that really says something about the kind of person you are.
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 6 years ago
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I would do anything for even a stranger. I know the pain, i wouldn't even put the horrid people of my past through it. You can call me a good person, or just a sick person who enjoys pain lol XD
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XxXxPerfectlyImperfectXxXx 6 years ago
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I think you're a good person. No one I know would do anything for a stranger. Everyone I know is pretty selfish. So you're definatley a good person :D
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KT_143 6 years ago
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I honestly hate this quote. Not because it's bad, (it's actually quite good) but because things like this don't actually happen in real life (Or the chances are very small.) You literally created the worst possible scenario, something that would be solved a lot differently in real life.
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 6 years ago
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It may not happen, but its based on parts of my life honestly. 3 of my siblings are gone from suicide, one by murder. The first suicide was "Why didn't i stop him from killing her" And after that it all crumbled. I may have picked the worst, but i know the feelings. And the loss of a child as well, not to suicide, but still i know the pain
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KT_143 6 years ago
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You know what the worst is, so you know what you're talking about. Sometimes people don't understand what they're talking about on Witty, and that's why I wasn't sure if you really knew what you were talking about, but I guess you do so I'm not going to disagree.
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 6 years ago
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I know what you mean, like once in a while i see quotes about like depression, and they are like just stop, just find a reason to be happy. If you've been through it, you know it isnt that easy. And thank you
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KT_143 6 years ago
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You're welcome. I've never been through depression (thank god I haven't) but I have been studying psychology and I know that there's a lot more to depression than just being sad.
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CookieMonster09* 6 years ago
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omg, this was just... i dont know what to say.....
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 6 years ago
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thank you <3
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amazed* 6 years ago
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Try not to cry. Lie down. Cry a f/cking river.
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StarWolf00 6 years ago
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This Made Me Cry So Hard, Haha.
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jay99 6 years ago
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This was awesome!
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BrokenTwilight 6 years ago
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Sweet baby jesus. ^O^
You, my good sir, deserve a nobel prize or some crap.

I need some Ice-cream and mean girls to be able to stop crying at how amazing this is, Keep writing<3

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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 6 years ago
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Thank you!!! XDDD I loveeeeeee you for that
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xxjuliarocksit556xx 6 years ago
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This is amazing! You rock!! ;D <3
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IHateHowMuchILoveYou 6 years ago
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wow. this is...wow. amazing, powerful, beautifully written...just wow....
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chocomickey14 6 years ago
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<3
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jooyjooy 6 years ago
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Amen
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ialmostlovedyouwhy 6 years ago
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your what i call an inspiration, every quote every poem, your... BEYOND WHAT WORDS CAN EVER DESCRIBE.
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 6 years ago
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Thank you <3 i try :3
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posted March 26, 2013 at 4:37pm EDT tagged with story, life, hurt, depression, myquote, parents, suicide, dontgiveup, imagine, ithurts, lifechanging, justanotherwittyguy18, inspirational