Death Quote #6712324
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His life is like a tunnel, Long and dark, It almost seems never

His life is like a tunnel,
Long and dark, 
It almost seems never ending.
He contemplates crashing,
Smashing his car into the wall,
Creating his own death,
But he worries of those behind him.
He worries that the tunnel could collapse,
So he holds it up himself,
He worries that it is breaking,
So he takes time to fix every crack.
He holds it up,
As you pass through,
Because he would do anything to have you smiling,
And anything to cause himself pain.
His life is like a tunnel,
Only he's only holding it up for you,
He wants to drop it,
But who can he trust to hold it up,
If he gets tired and has to let go?
His life is like a tunnel,
And he is the beam,
He won't let it hurt you,
He'll let you cause him pain.
His life is like a tunnel,
Long, dark and cold.
His life is like a tunnel,
And his grip is growing weak.


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21 Comments

*compassionate soul* 1 decade ago
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This, this is great :) <3 and very inspirational hon :)
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 1 decade ago
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Thank you <3333
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*compassionate soul* 1 decade ago
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You're welcome :3 <333
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sillymonkey_123 1 decade ago
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This blew my mind, I had to read it twice just to soak it all in. So inspirational, no joke! (:
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 1 decade ago
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Thank you <3
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barakat* 1 decade ago
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This is amazing omfg
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 1 decade ago
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thank you <333
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barakat* 1 decade ago
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No seriously - I'm saving this and cherishing it forever, because this is better than most other poetry, or even writing in general, that I've ever read. Like whoa, why are you not famous?
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 1 decade ago
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Omg you made me blush D: One day hopefully i will be famous :3
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barakat* 1 decade ago
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Yeah, I think you'll definitely make it. I mean, JK Rowling was turned down by like over 20 publishers or something before anyone signed Harry Potter? So like, if this doesn't become a famous poem, we will have a problem.
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 1 decade ago
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Holy lol i love harry potter D: LOL well hope for me!
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SparksFly34 1 decade ago
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Sooo so so so so so so so so so happy to see you writing again :) you're writing, in my eyes is flawless and has such raw emotion.... It's beautiful. I wish I had more to say, but I'm kinda speechless❤
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 1 decade ago
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Kimmmmmm you always make me so happy with your comments <3
I love youuuuuu <3
And thank you
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SparksFly34 1 decade ago
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Love youu too <3 You being happy makes me happy (and que my cheesy powers)
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sheyannadawn72* 1 decade ago
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asdfghjkl;'
PLEASE GIVE ME THE TALENT TO WRITE LIKE YOU,
ugh.
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Yo_Im_Ronan_ 1 decade ago
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Ugh
This poem is perfect your writing is perfect
YOU'RE perfect <33
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 1 decade ago
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LMAO thank you baybay <3
I might publish this one as well :3
I'm not perfect D: thats you!
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Yo_Im_Ronan_ 1 decade ago
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You should :oo
I would read it everyday and make everybody I know read it >:D
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 1 decade ago
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AHHHH that's too many XDDD
I'm shyyy D:
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Yo_Im_Ronan_ 1 decade ago
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I don't know that many people though XD
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 1 decade ago
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hmmmmm... 10 is too many :o
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posted April 9, 2013 at 9:12pm UTC tagged with death, dark, depression, suicide, poetry, poems, justanotherwittyguy18, metaphoric

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