It's a great chapter, except it's a bit shorter then I was expecting. I know how you feel, whenever my day is horrible my chapters end up sucking. My advice on that is to just no write on those days. Another thing that really helps me is movies. When I'm stuck and don't know what/how to write, i just go to random movies. They inspire me. All in all, it was really good. But, be a little more detailed. Slow down the moment just a little bit. Don't tell us what happened show us. But again Love it, can't wait for the next one
Thanks for the advise, it's really important to me:) it's just that my whole week (and probably month) sucks and I wanted to write a chapter because I love you guys but this happened ._. I'll try to get over it so that my writing will be better. Want me to notify you btw?