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Love Lies Prologue She sat on the edge of her bed, a calander

Love Lies
Prologue

She sat on the edge of her bed, a calander across her lap. Only ten more days before her boyfriend came home. Nick was a sweet guy, protective and funny. He was an A+ student. He would be picked on by the jocks, if it weren't for the fact he was a jock. He was the center forward for the Varsity soccer team, and had led them to several victories this past season. He was part of a foreign exchange program, but got permission to leave late in order to play soccer for his hometown. He'd been gone for 3 months now, but in 10 days, she'd be back in  his arms. Her alarm began beeping and she realized if she didn't get ready she'd be late for school. She was also an A+ student, honors classes and right defense on the girls JV soccer team. She was second string of course, but she was there and she played hard. She stood in front of her triple mirror vanity and brushed her brown hair until it was straight. It wasn't hard, her shoulder length hair was naturally straight. She had blonde highlights, and red dip-dyed tips in the back. It cascaded down her back, and pulled it to a high ponytail. Pulling on jean shorts, a crop-top tank that tied in the front country style, and brown combat boots that went to her mid-calf, she walked to the bathroom to cake her face with fake beauty. She applied foundation to make her lighter. Most people wanted to look more tan, but she was too tan. Next she smothered her lashes in 3 different brands of mascara, and outlined the bottom eyelids with brown eye liner. A smudge of gray eye shadow and some pink lip gloss and she was out the door. Skipping breakfast, because hey, a girl needs too look perfect, she grabbed her car keys and left the house. Sliding into the front seat of a sleek silver car, she drove to pick up her friend Grace. "Gracieeeee do you have money? Cuz this b//tch needs coffee," she whined, an annoying squealish sound filling the car. "I'll buy you a large caramel latte with extra whip if you promise to never make that sound again," Grace said. "Make it fat free and you got a deal," she said. "Oh my God, Bridgette, you're so thin, why do you insist on dieting like this?" Grace replied. Bridgette made the annoying squeal again. "OKAY!" Grace laughed. "Fat free it is" she said as they pulled into McDonalds drive through. They got coffees and rode off to school. "Nick comes home soon, doesn't he?" Grace asked. "Yeah," Bridgette smiled, "10 days and he's all mine. I have plans for that boy. I've been waiting 3 months. He's mine," she finished. Grace just laughed, an awkward, nervous laugh. She knew all too well where this was headed. Ten days is too long for Bridgette. This was going to get ugly, and quick.
 
Okay, hi. I guess I'm trying something new here. I haven't seen a story like what I'm planning on making happen in this one yet on Witty, but I've seen better ones. Read please I guess? I just want feedback. Even if you only read a chapter, and tell me it sucks and my grammar sucks and I need better word choice. I don't care. I want feedback. Follow if you like it, I guess. I'll do notifs if anyone actually wants to read this.... :/ (My bio explains my feelings on my writing if it isn't obvious enough)

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Bravosierra* 1 decade ago
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Hi qt . It's easier to keep up if you A) You should start a new paragraph whenever someone is talking . b) use new paragraphs as much as you can. no chapter is 1 big paragraph . go to polyvore.com make an account and design outfits for your stories. its a visual thats fun to do !
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ScaredToDeath 1 decade ago
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my computer's really messed up the enter key only works sometimes so its hard to indent and use new paragraphs and i tried polyvore im not a fan
i trashed this story anyway so it's okay but i'll keep the paragraph tips in my head and try and get my enter to work
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*silvergirl* 1 decade ago
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Notify please :)
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ScaredToDeath 1 decade ago
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Okay (:
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*silvergirl* 1 decade ago
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Thanks :D
It seems cool
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ScaredToDeath 1 decade ago
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I'm hoping it doesn't just turn into mindless rambling. My boyfriend told me not to pre-write it and edit it, just to type it as I go, so I don't know ://
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*silvergirl* 1 decade ago
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Oh that's good!
I don't write on witty, I tried fam docs and it didn't work so I just write horror novels in my notebook
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ScaredToDeath 1 decade ago
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I tried to write in a notebook but it got kind of graphic so I didn't continue. I'm going to try to keep this one clean, but I doubt it will work. I write s//x. It makes me seem s//utty, but I like reading that stuff so I don't know. It just sort of happens. I hope not with this story. Not graphic, at least. I just posted chapter 1 by the way
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*silvergirl* 1 decade ago
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I read it! Awesome!
My books are disturbing.
A line from it:
"The demons from the basement enfolded into her spirit , eating her insides and making her become one of their own"
And yeah there is some in it and some fowl language
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ScaredToDeath 1 decade ago
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I'd read something like that xD You know the show Supernatural?
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*silvergirl* 1 decade ago
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No I've never heard of it :0
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ScaredToDeath 1 decade ago
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OMG well if you have netflix it's on there if not watch it on youtube, there's gotta be clips. It reminds me of that, it's about 2 guys that hunt down demons and sh//t searching for the demon that killed their mom. It's a good show, especially if you're into that stuff. I think it's pretty cool
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*silvergirl* 1 decade ago
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Hmm I'm not really into stuff like that
I'm more into writing about stuff like paranormal activitys
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ScaredToDeath 1 decade ago
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Ohhhh lol sorry I saw demon and just kinda thought of it xD
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*silvergirl* 1 decade ago
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That's ok
XD
Do you like Stephen King?
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ScaredToDeath 1 decade ago
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Actually I've never read one of his books.. I read sappy love stories or sad stories mainly
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*silvergirl* 1 decade ago
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Ohhh ok
I am a Stephen king and jk Rowling type of girl
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ScaredToDeath 1 decade ago
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I like JK Rowling. I've read all 7 Harry Potter books twice, the first time when I was in 3rd grade xD
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*silvergirl* 1 decade ago
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I have read the series five times
Once in grade one once in grade two once in grade three once in grade seven
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ScaredToDeath 1 decade ago
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Lol that's 4 and I couldn't read well enough for Harry Potters in first grade
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*silvergirl* 1 decade ago
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Oh and once in grad eight XD

I am a reader. I am gifted in it :0
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ScaredToDeath 1 decade ago
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I grew into it. I read above my grade level always, but never that much. xD
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*silvergirl* 1 decade ago
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In SK I was a grade four level.
I am only good at a few things . English (so like reading and writing) Maths
Music Sciences that is basically what I got honours in
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ScaredToDeath 1 decade ago
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I'm a total nerd, I do good in English, Math, Science, and for the most part History too. I'm not bad in music, and I get alone in home ec. I love gym to death even though I suck at it, and my tech ed classes were my absolute favorite
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*silvergirl* 1 decade ago
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I am going into year 9
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ScaredToDeath 1 decade ago
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So am I!!
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ScaredToDeath

posted July 17, 2013 at 9:51pm UTC tagged with love, lies, prologue, lovelies, story

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