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Here's the poem that I'm scared to post, please be nice!

Here's the poem that I'm scared to post, please be nice!
-Lynn x
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Roses are red
Violets are blue
Sugar is sweet
And perhaps so are you

But the roses are wilted
The violets are dead
The sugar bowls empty
Your wrists are stained red

The sun isn't shining;
The sky isn't clear
There's no silver lining
Since you're no longer here

Rain keeps on pouring
Theres no end in sight
You're lying there frozen
So far from the light

Your beauty is unreal
Your smile, the sun
But times can't be turned
Not your actions undone

The words you wrote,
Only I read
"I love you so much;
Don't cry when I'm dead"

A bond that we formed
A love that ran deep
A pain that we shared
A friend I could keep

I wanted to hold you
To wipe tears from your eyes
Been there the moment
That you said goodbye

I want to forget...
But most times I don't

I want to let gp...
But i know that I don't

Tears on my face,
Memories in my head

The roses are wilted
the violets are dead



10 Comments

MusicFreak24 1 decade ago
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OMG I wish i could write like that!! <3 btw you're beautiful :)
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100wordsunsaid 1 decade ago
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I don't think I am but I'm glad you do!
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bianca1602 1 decade ago
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Girl, that is some kickass writing! I'd give anything to be able to write like that. The words are sooo well written and it seems like you put a lot of heart into writing it. Well done
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100wordsunsaid 1 decade ago
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thank you sooo much! I was really nervous posting this, so I spent ages obsessing over it! I do that a lot and I have others but I'm not sure if they're any good! :/
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[deleted] 1 decade ago
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Omg. THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. I love it so much!
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100wordsunsaid 1 decade ago
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thank you
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AnInsecureGirl 1 decade ago
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Girl, this is amazing. I want to get a tattoo of that line, "The roses are wilted, the violets are dead." I have to get your permission, right? Since it's your poem? So, can I get a tattoo of that beautiful verse?
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100wordsunsaid 1 decade ago
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of course you can! I would be honoured if u would want to put my poem on you! thank you sooo much!
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Oniichan 1 decade ago
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Good job :')
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100wordsunsaid 1 decade ago
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Thank you! I was extremely scared to put this up.
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100wordsunsaid

posted August 6, 2013 at 2:45pm UTC tagged with poem, sad, poems

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