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first poem after he critiqued my poems a poem on him you run

first poem after he critiqued my poems 
a poem on him

you run in my mind
like it's a cloverfield
like you're used to running in circles
altough that's a weird thing to do
I wish you didn't

but I get used to it
I show you secret paths 
trough my forrests
or carefully planted gardens
you run back into the field

and you leave spit on my petals




3 Comments

FrankConnor 9 years ago
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who's the critic?
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justkiddiing 9 years ago
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liam, long story
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FrankConnor 9 years ago
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gotcha.

Ik heb een illustrator nodig me meer talent dan mij...

of een leraar, zoda ik het toch zelf kan doen
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