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I want your opinion on this poem, should I put this in a contest? I
have another poem in my mind, that I had already made. But, I
really like it. So I might.
Please comment what you think, if I should! if you like this, and
it has a lot, I'll put it on as one of the poems to be put up
in the contest!
Thank you!
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Different kind of love.
She was a tale, told once.
Kept closed in a journal.
Loved a girl, lost a girl.
But still kept the same love.
She grew up to dislike feelings.
Like this inside that burns her, heart.
In a lost cause, she fought to find herself.
Found herself in the same current.
The sea of emotions, drowning her,
Every day, as the feelings grow.
And in her poems, she changes
the pronouns of 'her' to him.
So no one would know about,
the different kind of love.
She locked with a lock and key.
Hidden in her closet, underneath
The piles of clothes covering it,
she was hoping, for everyone.
To know except her secret,
lover who was there, always there.
Out of the closet, to finally breathe,
to know someone supports you,
And they love you so dearly,
but the secret lover turned out
to be the lost friend, lost love.
And now she understands,
If you have love, keep it.
Keep it till you have to let go.
Cause someone love doesn't last forever, just like
fire.