Hello There ! I love to read , I love to write ,I'm a nerd and Ed sheeran is absoluley amazing that's all you need to know. ;*
Raw story is posted here.
Edited version on Wattpad linked below.
Hey, ummm so I kind of write too. But since you're a great writer I was wondering id i could send you some of my writing and see what you think.. :) <3
Seriously. This is amaz9ing. Sorry it took me so long to respond.. I honestly find myself wanting to keep reading. Then I realize that it isn't written yet.. AMAZING though!!!!!
I LOVE The Summer That Changed it All!!!! You're an excellent writer, but there were a few misspellings :) Overall, I loved the humor and the sparks of romance between Daniel and Taylor :)
Sry i had to post this here it wouldnt let me reply.... And i just feel uncomfortable with it for some reason. I am pg 77 and want to get it published on day. Any way good luck with ur book. I gtg :) bi
This seems like the start to an amazing story! The plot is interesting, and the characters are well developed. However, i agree with the comment below stating the spelling mistakes. I understand, that the quotes do not have spell check, but with correct grammar/spelling the reader understands it better, and you are perceived as more professional. Also, a tip is to try to leave the reader hanging at the end. This will want them to wait until you put up the next chapter, and will capture their attention. Overall, it is a really great story! :)
Thank you ! Yes , i will do my best with grammar and spelling . Grammar has always been a weakness of mine .If i spell something wrong it's typically carelessness ,and i will try to be better with that . Thank you for the tip !I will attempt in chapter 6 i hadn't seen this until i had already posted chapter 5 .Thank you ! I appreciate the feedback (:
This is a great story! Please keep writing some, and telll me when you post so I can read it. This is actually really good. :).. Though i did notice a lot of misspelled words, so I would check tht before you postt it. :) hope it helps!
Thank you !(: I will !Yes , i am not well with grammar and witty isn't wattpad so they don't have spell check sadly , but i will attempt to review it better for the next update .Thank you for the feedback !
:) <3 KEEP WRITING!