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I still love you. Extended Ending. Conner's POV- **1 week

I still love you.

Extended Ending.
Conner's POV-
**1 week later**
I stood in the bathroom, staring at myself in my new black suit.
I had baught it just for Kadri's funeral.
It pained me so much to think about her, it only reminded me more that I was to blame.
I know that if she were here right now, she'd blame herself.
But she's not here.
If I had any tears left in me, I would be crying right now.
Seeing that the funeral was starting in 30 minutes, I decided to begin walking now.
I grabbed the letter she had written me, and neatly slid it into my pocket.
A lot of people would think it's ridiculous I carry it around like that, but it's nearly the only piece of her that I have left.
When I arrived at the burial area, dozens of people dressed in black stood weeping.
All of Kadri's friends, classmates, and her family.
I went over to talk to her mom, who I hadn't spoken to since the day Kadri had passed away.
I gave her a hug, and she cried.
"I miss her so much." I whispered, feeling a tear trickle down my cheek.
"She loved you more than she loved herself, Connor, and I know she's glad you're here."
"I love her too." I shut my eyes tightly, letting steamy tears roll down my face.
The ceremony soon began, and people stood up to say a few last words on Kadri's behalf.
"Wait!" I called, as they were about to begin the burial.
I stood up, and took the microphone from a tall man and walked up to the podium.
"As most of you know," I began.  "My name is Connor Brickmann, Kadri's boyfriend.  Kadri is the most amazing girl I have ever met.  She was never afraid to be herself, and most of all, she never hesitated to stand out.  Not a lot of people know her like I do, but I wish you would've gotten the chance to.  She's one of those girls that when it starts raining, and everyone else heads for shelter, she dances in it..I held Kadri's hand as her heart stopped beating, and you know what?  She had a smile on her face.  I know Kadri's up there right now smiling down at us.  And even though she's not with us anymore, my heart will always belong to her.  No one could ever take her place."
I left the stage, more tears rolling down my damp face.
Soon, they began to let people say their last goodbye's to Kadri.
I decided to go last, because I wanted to be the last person to ever tell her 'i love you.'
When everyone else had taken their turn, I approached the casket.
She still looked as perfect as ever, and as beautiful as always.
She was wearing my sweatshirt, the one she fell asleep in that night.
I remember when I gave it to her a few months ago at a football game.
It was my favorite sweatshirt, but I would give every sweatshirt in the world just to see her smile again.
As I said my last goodbye, a big gust of wind blue down on me.
And when I looked up, if only for a second, I saw the faint outline of angel wings.
I knew that it was Kadri.
"I love you Kadri Marie." I whispered, smiling up into the sky.
 "
I always have, and I always will, love you."  
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45 Comments

x_light_x 1 decade ago
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This is the first witty story I have cried over...
Really good plot and writing. Keep it up!
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[deleted] 1 decade ago
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I never cry over a end of a book but with this one I did
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saraelizabethx13 1 decade ago
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Every chapter I ended up crying.. You have an amazi g gift for writing.. Keep it up:)
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MehLifeStory 1 decade ago
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Only started reading this today because i knew i would be able to finish today. Crying.com. Lovely story. Oh so sad. ;(
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ErinBabeeX 1 decade ago
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I Love This Story So Much <3 xx
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Amzybabe98 1 decade ago
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I'm actually crying. I just read this entire story and for some reason, this was an amazing ending. Thank you.
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DomoWorld 1 decade ago
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I'm crying right now.
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Cassiee9715 1 decade ago
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you girl, have a truely amazing gift & it will take you far in life. this entire story was amazing & i could relate to a lot of it. you make your characters come alive in your stories & its amazing. i cried the last 2 chapters, my salty tears rolling off my cheeks. i'm hoping one day, many more people get to read this story. its absolutely amazing. Write on girl!
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secretsofagirl 1 decade ago
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The tears are falling from my eyes. You have a gift, you will go far with your writing.
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xoemilyoxox 1 decade ago
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I'm crying.....I don't ever cry in books or whatever but I just started this story tonight.&&. I just finished it the same night!!!! I was obsessed butt why this depressing edinng!!?!? Imm crying!!!!); legit this is spool depressing but it was an amazing story.&&. I know that not all endings are happy but i just hoped this wud be.<33333 I loved this story.&&. Ur such a good writer.(: I can compare to this story so much!!! This guy I fell in love broke up with me but it was so hard but now that it's been awhile I got over him but he recently texted me wanting me back but I can't take him back for what he did to me.....the reason he broke up with me was because he thought I was gonna....but I taught him a lesson so he knows that he hurt me so bad.&&. Made me cry everyday.&&. I want going to left him think that was okay.....but just wanted to let you knoww that this was an amazing story.&&. Im rly liking ur story.(:
-Emilyy.(:
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ShannonXoxo143 1 decade ago
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i sat like a loner and cried for the last 2 chapters, they were heart breakinggg </3
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stephhouda 1 decade ago
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this is the most amazing witty story i have ever read. it was so touching, im literally bawling right now. amazing. you are an amazing writter
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_Mockingjay_SC 1 decade ago
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Im crying really hard right now. Im kinda new to reading your stories but they r really truely amazing!
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MarissaOCallaghan 1 decade ago
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This was such a great story and i literally cried... in fact i still am.
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KateKat 1 decade ago
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I just say and read the whole story from the intro to here and cried so hard<3 it was amazing and I'm hooked on your writing!
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BrandyDuhh 1 decade ago
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i cried the whole time i was reading the last two chapters . the story was amazing .
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daisysplash 1 decade ago
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That's such a sweet way to end a story! Sad, but sweet. You're a great writer!
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madisynnn2467 1 decade ago
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i literally cried as i read this but the story was really good i cant wait for the next one(:
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SGFP 1 decade ago
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Amazing!! Bitter sweet ending, but still an amazingly written story!! You should definitely write another one!!!!
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iamatree 1 decade ago
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im crying :'( literally, this was amazing
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