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The Letter. THE CHANGE. The Lie. Chapter 79: July 17 *Katia's

The Letter. THE CHANGE.  The Lie.

Chapter 79:       July 17 
*Katia's POV*

 A buzz from my phone brought me out of my trip down memory lane. 
I'll pick you up in a 10~Louis<3
Okay, see you then!~Katia
 
I checked to make sure I still looked okay in the mirror of the bathroom. I was wearing an outfit Louis had picked out during his clingy phase. At first I was okay with it because it kept him busy,  but now I wore in hopes that it would ease the awkward tension between us. Just thinking about our messed up situation made my heart ache and I turned from the mirror.
 
When my phone buzzed again I didn't even have to check it to know it was Louis telling me he was there. The thought of how two weeks ago he would of came up to the door and knocked to let me know he was here instead of just sending me a text ran through my head. I told myself I couldn't think of things like that and had to try to stay positive as I opened the door and walked out to his car.
 
We made small talk on the way to the concert, but not the way a couple should. Our conversation was stiff and formal; I don't know if we had ever talked like that before, not even on the first day we met. We both knew that too.
 
"Thank you for the tickets, Katia," Louis said with real emotion for the first time that night. That was the first sentence you could tell that we actually knew and cared about each  other.
 
"Your welcome," I said with a genuine smile. My voice was soft and gentle, not the fake happy it had been for the past week. Maybe tonight was actually going to go well, and we would go back to our old selves.
 
 
*After the concert*
 
"I'm going to go use the restroom and then we'll leave," I told Lou before walking off to the nearest restroom. 
 
The concert was amazing, and we both had an amazing time. We were back to our old selves, at least for a little bit. Before and during the concert we were, but as soon as it was over he couldn't stay off his phone. He kept compulsively checking it and despite my attempts I couldn't see who it was he was talking too.
 
There was a small line at the bathroom, must of hit it just at the right time, so it wasn't long after I left that I was washing my hands and walking back. As I entered the area I left Louis my eyes started scanning the spot I left him, but I couldn't see him. I slowly placed one foot in front of the other as I made my way to where we were standing minutes before and my eyes scanned the room looking for him.
 
I pulled my phone out to try to call him when I saw him, or at least the side of his face. He was talking to a girl, probably just a fan, with his back turned to me. I started to shove my phone back into it's pocket as I walked over to him. He shifted his stance, moving slightly to the right, letting me see the girl he was talking to.
 
I couldn't see her clearly, maybe because I really didn't want to, but she looked familiar. I was rummaging through my memory to try to figure out who it would be when someone cut in front of me, throwing me slightly off balance.
 
"Sorry!" they called back as I steadied myself. After sending her a slight glare I looked back at Lou and the girl he was talking to and saw the unthinkable.
 
Her arms were wrapped around his neck, pulling him closer to her and his hands rested on her hips. My mind struggled to process what I was seeing, it couldn't wrap around what was happening let alone form a sentence of what it was. They pulled apart and a grin was plastered across the girl's face, and then I finally understood and it hit me like a crashing wave at high tide.
 
Louis was kissing Ashlyn.
 
 

AUTHOR'S NOTE: I feel like this was obviously going to happen and very poorly executed, sorry. /: What do you think is going to happen? Do you think it's really Ashlyn? If not, who else could it be? Why would Ashlyn be in the UK? Any ideas of what is going to happen? How are you guys liking the story
Oh my goodness, I loved the feedback I got from you guys! Obviously I'm going to finish the story, and some good news is I'm out of school! So I'll be able to write more!
Also, before I end this book of an authors note, I want to give you a hint: the secret is bigger than what it appears. Don't let little things that happen confuse you. Thank you so much for reading! Love you all!

7 Comments

tigersforever 1 decade ago
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This is amazing, i still think wat i thought was gonna happen is still gonna happen. Keep on written! :)
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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago
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I'm still curious as to what your idea is haha(: and there is more happening, trust me! And I'm bout to start writing as I type lol Thanks for reading, it means a lot!
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tigersforever 1 decade ago
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of course, cant wait to see if it works out
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miserymary 1 decade ago
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Tuesday is too far awaaaay.
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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago
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I'm shooting to have it posted by tomorrow night, but if I don't then I will by Tuesday! Thanks for reading, hope you enjoy the story!(:
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TaintedCherry 1 decade ago
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No! Don't leave me hanging like that! :(
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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago
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Don't worry I'll have chapter 80 posted by Tuesday night!(: thanks for reading love!!
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posted May 19, 2013 at 12:15pm UTC tagged with story, onedirection, fanfiction, onedirectionfanfiction, tltctl, thechange

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