TheUltimateStoryCreator

Crying Love

Chapter 1
I waited outside the bathroom with my makeup bag in one hand and my hair accessories in another. I heard the door unlock and then rapidly open, my brother Blade exited without a word. I walked in, wincing at the strong odour of LYNX deodryant that Blade had left. I started to apply a thick layer of black eyeshadow when my dad walked in.
"Sweety, I'm taking a shower. Can you put your makeup on later?" He asked with a sympathetic, apologetic look on his face.
"No, Dad. I need to look my best to impress the new boy at school! Take it later?" I put my look-I'm-doing-something-really-important-so-go-away-for-now face on.
He reluctantly agreed, so I thanked him and smiled. I put my jet black hair into a bun and went to put my homework in my school bag. I had finally finished my report on th discovery of America. Yes, behind my thick layers of goth makeup, clothes and speech, I was somebody different. I was a know-it-all, I was bullied when I was 7, but when I moved to secondary school I disguised myself. I wore a mask, I buried my identity.


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THIS IS THE HOT TEST....
HOW HOT ARE YOU? GET A PIECE OF PAPER AND NUMBER IT
1-11 (NO CHEATING)


WHEN YOU SEND IT ON PUT YOUR SCORE AT THE BOTTOM

1. WHAT SHADE OF HAIR DO YOU HAVE?

a) Dark
(b) Light

2. OUT ON A DATE WOULD YOU WANT TO:

a) Go to a party
(b) Go out to eat

3. WHAT IS YOUR FAVORITE COLOR OUT OF:

a) Baby-Pink
b) Yellow
c) Baby-Blue
d) Turquoise

4. PICK YOUR FAVOURITE HOBBY OUT OF:

a) Talking
b) Dancing
c) Taking Long Walks

5. IF YOU COULD PICK A STORE OUT OF THE FOLLOWING, WHICH WOULD IT BE?

a) Louie Vuitton
b) coach
c) againt all odds?

6. WHAT IS YOUR FAVOURITE PLACE
OUT OF
THE FOLLOWING?

a) hawaii
b) London
c) florida

7. IN THE SUMMER WOULD YOU
RATHER GO
TO:

a) The Beach
b) Somewhere Cooler

8. WHAT IS YOUR BIRTHDAY MONTH?

a) January
b) February
c) March
d) April
e) May
f) June
g) July
h) August
i) September
j) October
k) November
l) December

9. WOULD YOU RATHER:

a) Chill at home
b) Go out with friends

10. WHAT IS YOUR FAVOURITE
INSTRUMENT
OUT OF:

a) Guitar
b) Bass guitar
c) Drums
d) The Triangle

11) NAME A PERSON OF THE
OPPOSITE GENDER



====NOW MAKE A WISH!====
................................................

*****!!!!!*STOP*!!!!!*****

**ANSWERS** > > > >

1.
a. dark= sexy [5points]
b. light = sweet [2 points]

2.
a. go to a party = playful [2 points]
b. go out to eat = romantic [5 points]

3.
a. baby-pink = cute [2]
b. yellow = loud [3]
c. baby-blue = cool [5]
d. turquoise = sexy [5]

4.
a. Talking = active [2]
b. Dancing = determined [2]
c. Taking Long Walks = daring [5]

5.
a. Louie Vuitton = tasteful [7]
b. coach = laid back [2]
c. againt all odds = stylish [5]

6.
a. hawaii = you like being around
people [2]
b. L.. You are quiet, and like the
cold [2]
c. florida = You like to party! [5]

7.
a. beach = tan, likes the sun [5]
b. somewhere cooler = pale and original [2]

8.
a. January = popular [5]
b. February = lovely [2]
c. March = rebellious [5]
d. April = playful [5]
e. May = happy [5]
f.. june = chills a lot [5]
g. July = smooth [3]
h. August = fun [5]
i. September = quiet [2]
j. October = out-going [3]
k. November = pimpin' it [5]
l.. December = warm [3]

9.
a. home = quiet, romantic [5]
b. go out with friends =crazy [5]

10.
a. guitar = eye-catching [5]
b. bass-guitar = mellow [5]
c. Drums = crazy [5]
d. Triangle = simple [2]

11. This person will fall in LOVE with you!

SCORES!!!!

UP TO 17= You can do better than that!

18-20= Okay...

21-35 = Rather HOT...!

36+ = OWWW, YOU BURN!!!

NOW REPOST THIS IN THE NEXT 2
MINUTESAND YOU WILL HAVE
GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR
ANSWER FOR NUMBER 11

REPOST AS: HOT TEST & then write your score at the bottom.

If you don't repost this you will have the following:

~ You will fail your tests
~ You will cut your finger
~ You will lose someone close to you
~ You will not have a good day for the next 12 years

--And if you do repost this you will:

~ be kissed by your crush before next month
~ have good luck
~ have someone fall in love with you
~ have your biggest dream come true

MY SCORE:43