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Okay, so here i go. My name is christina, im 14 and i live in new york city. this account will be for reviews i do on storys. I will rate the story on a scale of 1- 10. 1 being the lowest 10 being the highest. I will be honest so please do not be upset if i give you a low rating i will always give you tips on how to fix it and i will always point out the things i liked and disliked in your story. If i do review someones story several times i will start to follow you. ( every time you do a new chapter i will review if you want me to but you will have to ask). Well yeah. I know people are gunna hate on this account but whatever. hate comments will be deleted and hate quotes will be ignored.
Okay well thats the stuff you need to know.
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Need a review on a story?
comment with the name of your
story and how many chapters :)
Need a review on a story?
comment with the name of your
story and how many chapters :)
"Breathe"
By: Beautifulx
This story was very funny and interesting from the start. I enjoy reading this i honestly do. I see that at the end of some of the storys you put "if it gets more faves" something like that, But you have a great group of girls behind you reading your story. I don think that you should stop reading just because people didnt have time to read your story. There just enough conversation, a little more detail.This story could get a little more attention. if your reading this please check out this story. thanks!
Rate. I/10 you get a 8.9
By: Beautifulx
This story was very funny and interesting from the start. I enjoy reading this i honestly do. I see that at the end of some of the storys you put "if it gets more faves" something like that, But you have a great group of girls behind you reading your story. I don think that you should stop reading just because people didnt have time to read your story. There just enough conversation, a little more detail.This story could get a little more attention. if your reading this please check out this story. thanks!
Rate. I/10 you get a 8.9
"Forget the Future"
By: writinglastsforever
This story is very very creative
and i reallly enjoyed it. Please keep writting. Since there was
only one chapter i could really do a high rate off of this story.
I know its only the first chapter but there needs to be more
detail and conversation.
Rate: 1-10 you get a
7.5
"Teenage Dream"
By: Teenagedream_x / Juliareneex
The one this i dislike is when people comment and say "Should i keep writing?"
That is completely up to you, But in this case you should keep writing because this story is something a lot of people can relate to so do us all a favor and keep writing. It was finally really getting somewhere and you just stopped writing! You need to keep writing because this story is gunna go really far. If you are reading this now go check out this story. It has a lot of detail but not enough conversation. And how long the story is, is a big deal to and a lot of people either write it to long or too short, yours is just right. And i dont see that very offten.
This story is very very good and you are a very talented writer.
On a scale of 1 to 10 its an 8.8
By: Teenagedream_x / Juliareneex
The one this i dislike is when people comment and say "Should i keep writing?"
That is completely up to you, But in this case you should keep writing because this story is something a lot of people can relate to so do us all a favor and keep writing. It was finally really getting somewhere and you just stopped writing! You need to keep writing because this story is gunna go really far. If you are reading this now go check out this story. It has a lot of detail but not enough conversation. And how long the story is, is a big deal to and a lot of people either write it to long or too short, yours is just right. And i dont see that very offten.
This story is very very good and you are a very talented writer.
On a scale of 1 to 10 its an 8.8
"Players Next Target"
By: Loveetolaughh10
This story is just... WOW. This story defineds my life. Its amazing. Don't ever stop writting. I would love* to read more. Theres only 10 chapters so far and im addicted to this story. loveetolaughh10 is an amazing writters and everyone reading this should go check out her stories. There is a lot of detail but no alot of conversation. And the storys should be a little longer. This story could use a little more attention and I do have a list of top writters, You my friend will deffinetly be on it! And thats an honor :)
On a scale of one to ten this story gets a 9.8
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Waiting on the World to Change"
By: True_Love_NEVER_Ends
This story only has 4 chapters and Romance and Drama is already starting. i LOVE it. please keeep writting. It could use a little more conversation and it could be a little longer but thats up to. I think its amazing. Like i say with almost everybook i review it could use a little more attention. If you guys are into summer romance books or storys this is right for you. Check this book out.
Fave/Follow/ Comment! thanks guys.
On a scale of 1-10 this story gets a
8 1/2
*if you guys want a story review follow and comment please. but it may take some time because i currently have 10 other sotrys to read and it make take little longer if you story is nl the long side but that does not mean i wont review it! so comment! no matter how long i willllll review!*
Waiting on the World to Change"
By: True_Love_NEVER_Ends
This story only has 4 chapters and Romance and Drama is already starting. i LOVE it. please keeep writting. It could use a little more conversation and it could be a little longer but thats up to. I think its amazing. Like i say with almost everybook i review it could use a little more attention. If you guys are into summer romance books or storys this is right for you. Check this book out.
Fave/Follow/ Comment! thanks guys.
On a scale of 1-10 this story gets a
8 1/2
*if you guys want a story review follow and comment please. but it may take some time because i currently have 10 other sotrys to read and it make take little longer if you story is nl the long side but that does not mean i wont review it! so comment! no matter how long i willllll review!*
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"Chasing Stars."
By: xxdangerousxx
this is definetly a story to read. It only has 2 chapters so far but i think its really going some where. The first chapter just amazed me. Who is the person that dies and why does He die? Its automatically a clif hanger. This story does need more attention. It has just a enough detail but i think i needs a little more conversation. And how those to people are already falling inlove is so...AMAZING!!!.
On a scale of 1-10 i would rate this story a
9 1/2
*if you want a story reviewed follow and
comment with the storys name and if it is
under an addtional account. Thanks
-Wittyreviewsx3
"Chasing Stars."
By: xxdangerousxx
this is definetly a story to read. It only has 2 chapters so far but i think its really going some where. The first chapter just amazed me. Who is the person that dies and why does He die? Its automatically a clif hanger. This story does need more attention. It has just a enough detail but i think i needs a little more conversation. And how those to people are already falling inlove is so...AMAZING!!!.
On a scale of 1-10 i would rate this story a
9 1/2
*if you want a story reviewed follow and
comment with the storys name and if it is
under an addtional account. Thanks
-Wittyreviewsx3
"It's never getting better."
By:ZebraaxLovee
i started crying while reading this story. I love this story so much.
But, You need just a little more detail and little more conversation!
But besides that this story definitely has a great plot. I can definitely relate to this story (losing someone close to me).Please keep writting , this is a story that many people on this site can relate to including me. This story needs*** more attention, so if you wanna make someone happy please go read this story there is only 7 chapters so far and it is very interesting.
On a scale of 1- 10 this story is a
9
*Comment on my profile if you want a review, comment with title of story and # of chapters, it would make my life a lot easier! Thanks! - Wittyreviewsx3