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DayDream Prologue Saturday 8:36 pm It was a rainy day with grey

 

DayDream
 
Prologue
Saturday
8:36 pm


    
      It was a rainy day with grey clouds that filled the air. Everyone was staying indoors, trying to keep from catching a cold. All except a certain group of boys and girls, who thought it would be fun to play in the rain. Niall and his best friend Mattison, Harry and his new girlfriend Dallas, Louis and his girlfriend Bryn, Liam and his bestfriend Meg, and finally Zayn and his friends Amy, Mackenzie, and Cece. They all splashed through puddles. Although it was a gloomy day to others, this group always looked on the fun side of things.
     Niall was having a particulary fun day. Nothing could ruin it.
     Yet.
     Zayn and Dallas splashed Harry as Meg, Amy, and Cece attacked Liam with umbrellas. Mattison, Louis, Bryn, and Niall stood to the side having a good time pushind eachother into the mud. It was all perfect, all smiles.
     That all changed when a girl ran up crying. They had never seen her before. At first she seemed to be a crazed fan of One Direction, but then the group realized she was scared and trembleing.
    "Please help! I saw a girl, she ran, the man!" She just spat out random words but the group understood what she meant. Niall took charge and tried to calm the girl down.
     "Slow down, what's your name?" he asked.
     "Tina! But the girl! Dying!" Tina spat. When she said that everyone tensed up.
     "Where is the girl?" Louis asked. Tina turned around and pointed. Niall saw a beautiful girl, whos face was covered in blood, running. A man went after her. The girl lost and the man grabbed her neck, choking her. The group all ran down to help the mysterious girl. Tina ran fastest and got there first. She held up her fist and swung. She got the man in the jaw. He seemed unfazed.
    "Put her down." Zayn commanded. The man stepped back and held up his hands, seeing that he was clearly out numbered. The girl fell to the ground and police sirens wailed in the distance. 
    Niall caught the girl, who was loosing concionsness. "It will be ok, your ok." Niall whispered to her before she drifted off.
     What he didn't know was that it was far from ok.
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AUTHOR'S NOTE:

Heyy guys! This is my first story here on Witty. I'm a fan of mystery and romance, so thats what I'm writing about. Thank you to all of those who volunteered to be a character in my story. If you have any feedback I would be happy to hear it.
Until we meet again fellow Wittians,
~FLAME~








 

6 Comments

macjohnson8 1 decade ago
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Yay I'm excited.(: if you do notifications for each chapter I want them!!!
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[deleted] 1 decade ago
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This is awesome!! I love it!! (:
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dallasrae910 1 decade ago
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Love itt. Another chapter?
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caseybear 1 decade ago
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THIS IS SO AMAZING <3
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CarryOnxxx 1 decade ago
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ahhh its so good !! :D
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TheStoryTellerx3 1 decade ago
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This is brilliant, i want more! xD
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posted November 22, 2012 at 1:22pm UTC tagged with story

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